From patchwork Fri Jan 20 03:07:45 2017 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: Jason Wang X-Patchwork-Id: 717451 Return-Path: X-Original-To: incoming@patchwork.ozlabs.org Delivered-To: patchwork-incoming@bilbo.ozlabs.org Received: from lists.gnu.org (lists.gnu.org [IPv6:2001:4830:134:3::11]) (using TLSv1 with cipher AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ozlabs.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 3v4Qfl1qMwz9sCg for ; Fri, 20 Jan 2017 14:09:33 +1100 (AEDT) Received: from localhost ([::1]:52220 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cUPZw-0001S5-Ab for incoming@patchwork.ozlabs.org; Thu, 19 Jan 2017 22:09:28 -0500 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:39508) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cUPYW-0000Qu-8z for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Thu, 19 Jan 2017 22:08:01 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cUPYV-0002oN-6y for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Thu, 19 Jan 2017 22:08:00 -0500 Received: from mx1.redhat.com ([209.132.183.28]:35502) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtps (TLS1.0:DHE_RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:32) (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cUPYV-0002o6-0p for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Thu, 19 Jan 2017 22:07:59 -0500 Received: from int-mx11.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com (int-mx11.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com [10.5.11.24]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by mx1.redhat.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 3DE7883F3F; Fri, 20 Jan 2017 03:07:59 +0000 (UTC) Received: from jason-ThinkPad-T450s.redhat.com (vpn1-6-106.pek2.redhat.com [10.72.6.106]) by int-mx11.intmail.prod.int.phx2.redhat.com (8.14.4/8.14.4) with ESMTP id v0K37r7a014507; Thu, 19 Jan 2017 22:07:56 -0500 From: Jason Wang To: peter.maydell@linaro.org, qemu-devel@nongnu.org Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2017 11:07:45 +0800 Message-Id: <1484881670-24237-2-git-send-email-jasowang@redhat.com> In-Reply-To: <1484881670-24237-1-git-send-email-jasowang@redhat.com> References: <1484881670-24237-1-git-send-email-jasowang@redhat.com> X-Scanned-By: MIMEDefang 2.68 on 10.5.11.24 X-Greylist: Sender IP whitelisted, not delayed by milter-greylist-4.5.16 (mx1.redhat.com [10.5.110.27]); Fri, 20 Jan 2017 03:07:59 +0000 (UTC) X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: GNU/Linux 2.2.x-3.x [generic] [fuzzy] X-Received-From: 209.132.183.28 Subject: [Qemu-devel] [PULL 1/6] docs: Fix description of the sentence X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.21 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Cc: Stefan Weil , Jason Wang , Zhang Chen Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+incoming=patchwork.ozlabs.org@nongnu.org Sender: "Qemu-devel" From: Zhang Chen Say it in another way to make it easier to understand. Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen Signed-off-by: Eric Blake Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil Signed-off-by: Jason Wang --- docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt index 76767cb..c4941de 100644 --- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt @@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary. == Usage == -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly. +Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more +clearly describe the usage. + Primary(ip:3.3.3.3): -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66