From patchwork Thu Dec 1 06:55:57 2016 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8" MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Patchwork-Submitter: Zhang Chen X-Patchwork-Id: 701384 Return-Path: X-Original-To: incoming@patchwork.ozlabs.org Delivered-To: patchwork-incoming@bilbo.ozlabs.org Received: from lists.gnu.org (lists.gnu.org [IPv6:2001:4830:134:3::11]) (using TLSv1 with cipher AES256-SHA (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ozlabs.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 3tTp5d65X3z9t1L for ; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 17:58:13 +1100 (AEDT) Received: from localhost ([::1]:48537 helo=lists.gnu.org) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJq-0001jD-2Z for incoming@patchwork.ozlabs.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:58:10 -0500 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:35920) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJE-0001RQ-TJ for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:33 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJA-0007iJ-PD for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:32 -0500 Received: from [59.151.112.132] (port=55960 helo=heian.cn.fujitsu.com) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJA-0007gr-Bs; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:28 -0500 X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.22,518,1449504000"; d="scan'208";a="13498100" Received: from unknown (HELO cn.fujitsu.com) ([10.167.33.5]) by heian.cn.fujitsu.com with ESMTP; 01 Dec 2016 14:57:08 +0800 Received: from G08CNEXCHPEKD03.g08.fujitsu.local (unknown [10.167.33.85]) by cn.fujitsu.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 05A5A41B5F58; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:57:09 +0800 (CST) Received: from localhost.localdomain (10.167.226.56) by G08CNEXCHPEKD03.g08.fujitsu.local (10.167.33.89) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.319.2; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:57:07 +0800 From: Zhang Chen To: qemu devel , QEMU Trivial , Michael Tokarev , Laurent Vivier Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:55:57 +0800 Message-ID: <1480575357-25056-1-git-send-email-zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.7.4 MIME-Version: 1.0 X-Originating-IP: [10.167.226.56] X-yoursite-MailScanner-ID: 05A5A41B5F58.AE5B4 X-yoursite-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-yoursite-MailScanner-From: zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: Genre and OS details not recognized. X-Received-From: 59.151.112.132 Subject: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix description of the sentence X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.21 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Cc: Stefan Weil , Zhang Chen Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+incoming=patchwork.ozlabs.org@nongnu.org Sender: "Qemu-devel" Say it in another way to make it easier to understand. Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen Signed-off-by: Eric Blake Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil --- docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt index 76767cb..c4941de 100644 --- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt @@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary. == Usage == -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly. +Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more +clearly describe the usage. + Primary(ip:3.3.3.3): -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66