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doc: Rephrase GM2 Limitations section

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Gerald Pfeifer Aug. 5, 2024, 7:09 p.m. UTC
I noticed a non-working link, then some other details in that section.

Here is a suggestion to rework it a bit.

Okay?

Gerald



From 83e856355a94bd78afbf19eed32ca1726658f581 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Aug 2024 21:06:20 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] doc: Rephrase GM2 Limitations section

gcc:
	* doc/gm2.texi (Limitations): Rephrase. Remove invalid link.
---
 gcc/doc/gm2.texi | 7 +++----
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

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Gaius Mulley Aug. 6, 2024, 7:30 p.m. UTC | #1
Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com> writes:

> I noticed a non-working link, then some other details in that section.
>
> Here is a suggestion to rework it a bit.
>
> Okay?
>
> Gerald
>
>
>
>>From 83e856355a94bd78afbf19eed32ca1726658f581 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Gerald Pfeifer <gerald@pfeifer.com>
> Date: Mon, 5 Aug 2024 21:06:20 +0200
> Subject: [PATCH] doc: Rephrase GM2 Limitations section
>
> gcc:
> 	* doc/gm2.texi (Limitations): Rephrase. Remove invalid link.
> ---
>  gcc/doc/gm2.texi | 7 +++----
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/gcc/doc/gm2.texi b/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
> index 5bff9eb3829..bfc8dc71f23 100644
> --- a/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
> +++ b/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
> @@ -2970,10 +2970,9 @@ $ @samp{directory to the sources}/contrib/test_summary
>  @node Limitations, Objectives, Regression tests, Using
>  @section Limitations
>  
> -Logitech compatibility library is incomplete.  The principle modules
> -for this platform exist however for a comprehensive list of completed
> -modules please check the documentation
> -@url{gm2.html}.
> +The Logitech compatibility library is incomplete.  The primary
> +modules for this platform exist, though for a comprehensive list
> +of completed modules please check the documentation.
>  
>  @node Objectives, FAQ, Limitations, Using
>  @section Objectives

Hi Gerald,

certainly yes - much clearer thank you!

regards,
Gaius
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diff --git a/gcc/doc/gm2.texi b/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
index 5bff9eb3829..bfc8dc71f23 100644
--- a/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
+++ b/gcc/doc/gm2.texi
@@ -2970,10 +2970,9 @@  $ @samp{directory to the sources}/contrib/test_summary
 @node Limitations, Objectives, Regression tests, Using
 @section Limitations
 
-Logitech compatibility library is incomplete.  The principle modules
-for this platform exist however for a comprehensive list of completed
-modules please check the documentation
-@url{gm2.html}.
+The Logitech compatibility library is incomplete.  The primary
+modules for this platform exist, though for a comprehensive list
+of completed modules please check the documentation.
 
 @node Objectives, FAQ, Limitations, Using
 @section Objectives